Rough cut feedback

Rough cut feedback.

Teachers Feedback:

What do you like about my project at this stage?

FC: Strong image, clean style and an eye catching colour scheme.

CONT: Middle image works well, title is clear bold page No.s

DPS: Unique style to page, good layout.

What could I improve?

FC: Maybe avoid dark background for shapes more features/photos.

CONT: More diversity with photos, for black text capitals/ different font.

DPS: More images of the band! Break text with quotes dead space.

Students Feedback:

There are a lot of students in my class so I have looked through my feedback and picked out the most important things for my magazine.

What do you like about my project at this stage?

FC: good bold title of the magazine, like the title, the inside circle/rectangle, positioning of the barcode, composition of the shot, layout, the banner at the top and the white background.

CONT: Stories separated well using red lines, random positioning of the lines looks good, band index, font used and nice composition of the images used on the contents page.

DPS: The title stands out really well, title looks amazing, the layout of the text with the green separation lines and the use of the IN-DEE logos/page numbers in bottom corners.

What could I improve?

FC: Sub-headings on front cover should be clearer, change the red text to make it stand out more and a couple more sub-heading on the front cover look a little plain.

CONT: Photo is too dark on contents, needs empty spaces filling up and make the Kieran Graham story smaller because The Coup is the main story.

DPS: More photos of the band, change the large photo and have more inset photos, text is too small, DPS looks clustered and make the quote bigger.